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Comment on Rabbits by Alirat

Alirat — Fri, 22 Apr 2011 08:34:32 +0000

Brilliant, Jonathan. I was on the edge of my seat with the tension. Very moving, real and gritty.

Comment on Pressing Pause by Pressing Pause

Pressing Pause — Sun, 20 Feb 2011 08:41:40 +0000

Pressing Pause…

[...]She noticed the speedometer climbing, as her usual morning battle against the fearsome combination of a Mother’s to-do list and the 8:30am start at work began. Day care had seemed like a temporary solution for her little Lydia, but bills kept arr…

Comment on My Four Fathers By Mia Griffiths – aged 6 by Laundry Sorter

Laundry Sorter — Wed, 17 Nov 2010 19:05:01 +0000

i would usually visit pet shops because my dog and cats can eat so much pet food in one day ‘,’

Comment on My Four Fathers By Mia Griffiths – aged 6 by Oscilloscope :

Oscilloscope : — Fri, 29 Oct 2010 18:46:49 +0000

i love to visit pet shops because i love to see cute little puppies`.,

Comment on A Hole in the Wall of the Universe by Alirat

Alirat — Mon, 09 Aug 2010 10:01:17 +0000

Brilliant, powerful, shocking.

Comment on Promises and Promiscuity (Part 1) by francina

francina — Mon, 05 Jul 2010 14:31:53 +0000

can’t wait to read the rest…

Comment on Legion -part 1 by Legion - Murder mystery. John Steadman is a slightly unusual man...

Legion - Murder mystery. John Steadman is a slightly unusual man... — Sun, 04 Jul 2010 05:06:38 +0000

[...] (Find Episode 1) [...]

Comment on Legion -part 1 by Alirat

Alirat — Sat, 26 Jun 2010 05:11:55 +0000

I’ve been a bit slow writing part 2 – but it’s on its way. It’s going to be more than a 2 parter too, I can tell you that! Heh heh…

Comment on Legion -part 1 by laurelc

laurelc — Sat, 26 Jun 2010 05:00:41 +0000

Very realistic, but not autobiographical, I hope…?

And how do I know it’s realistic, you might ask?

HAHAHAHA (chilling throaty laugh echoing in the dark of the night).

LOVE it!

Comment on It’s not about God by Alirat

Alirat — Sat, 26 Jun 2010 04:44:47 +0000

A botched funeral is a tragic thing for all concerned. It is about the life of the departed – and it’s also supposed to be a way for the ones left behind to have support through their grief.

I’m sorry you lost a friend Jonathan.